2011April manoomin Lake Team 6 Final Poster
Revised Lake Team6 Final poster
As manoomin students, teachers, scientists and mentors we are asking for constructive critique on our Lake Team posters. These posters will be presented by students at the upcoming site visit (May2 or 21) in the Twin Cities. Please take time to post your initial comments by April 22nd. Keep in mind the spirit of the student’s work. Our goal is to reflect the student’s words through constructive critique. Students should comment on their poster as well as one other team, all others please make comment on all three.
Revisions will be made accordingly b April 29th with a final poster available to critique by April 29. Re-checking our work will assure that we are accurate, factual and clear.
The final versions of the posters will be sent to the UM to be printed by Ma7 7th.
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Where are the posters? I cannot seem to find them?
Really great looking poster! Just noticed a few grammatical errors. On the left side, under “opening core section”, the sentence structure is a little off. Under “Phytoliths”, it should say “There ARE two main types of wild rice.” Under “Future Works”, it should be “…not to lose the core because OF the pipe being so muddy”.
Fix lake name, it should be “Naawonigami-zaaga’igan”, maybe add captions under photos
I think captions sound good too. I’m in the process of adding them. When all is redone please re-read caption to see that they are correct. Thanks for comment!
Nice job, Lake Team 6!
First column of text:
Change “Location” to “Locations”
I don’t understand the statement “The core is also labeled so . . .” – reword for clarity
“awhile” to “a while”
“.5um tall” should be “0.5um across”
Second column:
If you want to add the LacCore scientists’ names (to be consistent with other groups’ posters), they are: Amy Myrbo, Jessica Heck, Bob Thompson, Rob Lusteck, and Avery Shinneman. Resource Management team members were Tom Howes, Sean Thompson, and Adam Thompson.
“Using the cores” should be “Using the corers”
Third column:
“radiocarbon” is one word
After “Middle Portage Lake,” should be a semicolon, not a comma
Scanning electron microscope need not be capitalized.
Do not need to define manoomin again in last sentence
Last sentence doesn’t really follow.
I agree that nice descriptive captions would be good!
I think that others from LacCore have emailed some minor edits to Carolyn.